青桐の小さな帽子
small hat
of the parasol tree
slightly grown
作品１１２０ ryo
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2009年6月28日 (日)
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I can smell fresh air here.that's why I read your works before I sleep.
投稿： Masoumeh | 2009年6月29日 (月) 05時02分
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Masoumeh ,
Recently we had our meeting of English language
haiku here in our city. I introduced some of the exchanged information between you and me. You
can read the contents in my site below:
http://248.teacup.com/haikuryo/bbs
However, nearly the half is in Japanese.
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投稿： ryo | 2009年6月30日 (火) 22時40分
I read the page. I like to know what you discussed at meeting.
投稿： masoumeh | 2009年7月 3日 (金) 01時44分
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There were quite a few opinions. As one of them,
related to the following haiku verses:
a swan
fills
the lake
dewdrops on the twigs
expand endlessly absorbing
songs of cicadas
Mrs. Sone said each writer seems to have his/her
mind’s eye.
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投稿： ryo | 2009年7月 3日 (金) 22時32分
I agree with her.
投稿： Masoumeh | 2009年7月 9日 (木) 15時07分
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Mr. Yoshizawa’s opinion:
“intuition” seems to have a meaning “a part of
something tells us everything”.
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投稿： ryo | 2009年7月10日 (金) 13時55分
I couldn't get what he means .
投稿： Masoumeh | 2009年7月11日 (土) 05時12分
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Masoumeh, I often mention this idea when we have
a meeting of English language haiku. Today I will
show you what Professor Sato wrote for my haiku
when I was awarded the first-prize for my haiku
below in 1984 Haiku In English Contest:
standing on end
among the fallen leaves
a tiny acorn
Ryo Suzuki
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投稿： ryo | 2009年7月12日 (日) 16時44分
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Professor Sato’s comment:
It concerns a small surprise that the writer came
upon under an oak tree—an acorn standing on
end among fallen leaves. Whether an acorn lying
or standing is no serious matter. On first reading,
this haiku seems unarresting, but after rereading,
the writer’s attention to and affection for a small
detail in Nature becomes clear. Haiku often evokes
common and easily-overlooked happenings in our
daily life. When successfully expressed, the
ordinary scene suddenly acquires a new meaning.
Suzuki’s haiku is just like that. I feel as if this
tiny acorn embodies even some cosmic significance.
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投稿： ryo | 2009年7月12日 (日) 16時46分
Thank you very much. I understood it better.
投稿： masoumeh | 2009年7月13日 (月) 22時22分
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I’m pleased you understood the idea related
to intuition much better.
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投稿： ryo | 2009年7月14日 (火) 12時34分